John12346's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shiny Teeth]

Nice flash.

It was very cute. Fairly Odd Parents and M&L: Superstar Saga go very well together. About your sound problem. I'm going to PM you with instructions on how to fix them.

Ways to improve:
1. Use a little more animation.

[Well that was odd....]

Cute, but it was much too short.

I'm afraid this isn't going to get a very good score, mainly because of its lack of length and sound. Personally, I liked it, and hope this makes it through to Newgrounds, but c'mon, you gotta know ALL of the things a flash needs.

Ways to improve:
1. Add sound.
2. Add music.
3. Make something longer.

krazehawk responds:

Thanks for the suggestions, I really wanted to add in everything else, but couldn't find any decent sounds. Right now I'm just glad everybody is being so helpful in their reviews. Thank you Newgrounds!

[Spinister Ep. 014]

Guy below me thought that you were advertising.

And the guy below him thought that crap should be censored to cr**.
Lol some people on Newgrounds can be real ninnies, eh?

Ways to improve:
1. I liked the graphics and awesome preloader and intro and all, but a flash is dependant on one graphics, it needs a whole movie.
2. Add music.

Listen, even if you do cheat the voting system to get every flash through, it doesn't mean that people like it. All that they think are, "ZOMG THIS GUY HAS ANOTHER FLASH ON NG FREE PROTECTION POINT!!!!!!!!1"

Spinister responds:

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I have a question.

If you know how to animate so well (evident in the intro), why is it that you make an awesome intrro and then follow through with a cruddy 2-3 frame flash after that? I know you can animate, you just refuse to do it right, for some reason.

Ways to improve:
1. Use those animating skills seriously and make something that people will like.
2. Add sound effects.
3. Make more content.
4. Add a story.
5. Use more than one background.

[Omfg Some Random Collab]

Not bad, comparitively.

I liked some of the flash here, and each one's different aspect contributed to my vote of 3.
Whoever made the intro to this movie, I know you know how to animate, so try making a good flash to submit to Newgrounds.

Devo Kitten's ways to improve:
1. Use a less annoying sound for your part.

Green's ways to improve:
1. Use a less annoying sound for your part.
2. Use a background.
3. Make it longer.

MaddflashDP's ways to improve:
1. Add sound.
2. Add a background.
3. Make it longer.

Lisard's ways to improve:
1. Make the sound a little louder.

Ebot's ways to improve:
1. Make your part longer.
2. Make the music a little louder.

Inferno Kitten's ways to improve:
1. Add a background.

Magyar responds:

omfg use real graphics you fucking sprite whore >:(

[Banana Phone]

Amazing!

I've must've seen a million high scoring submissions with a score of 4.19 and now you just break the chain with your fancy 4.20 score, eh?

In any case, the movie was fuck'n hilarious.

Ways to improve:
1. Add a mute button lol. (Nah, just kidding!)

[OMG! SMB Mishaps! 2]

COOL!

I like it!

Ways to improve:
1. None lol.

[[KK] Bbq Nudelz 4]

I dunno...

I've seen and reviewed many of your KK movies now, and I noticed that they all have something in common. Those things are kick-ass openings and crap movies that follow.

Ways to improve:
1. Make longer/more things in your collabs.
2. Try sound effects.

Suggestions:
1. Change the KK's line of work and only create intros only.

I was about to vote 5 after I saw the opening, but because of the inside content, I only voted 2.

Magyar responds:

Message from John12346:
If I told you I was lying, would you believe me?

NO!

[SS Seizure Collection #1]

Now this was kick ass.

Unlike most of your other submissions, this one was kick ass. I liked how you warned us in the title that these were seizure inducing. I liked all 4 of your works plus your good usage of buttons and how your movies were all kick ass.

Ways to improve:
1. Maybe remind us in the description aggain that the movie is seizure inducing. (You didn't warn us in the description, and that's probably why pepole voted low.)

WOOT! THE COLORS FROM THE MOVIE ARE STILL FLASHING BEFORE MY EYES! MASS VOTE 5!

[[KK] Chin & Cleft S1 EP 6]

Way too short.

Kitty Krew people, remember how I said you should make a movie. Well, you could do this: delete all six of these movies and put them together. People would like one forty-two second movie much better than six seven second movies. Get what I mean? Give it a try!

Ways to improve:
1. Make it longer.
2. Add better sound effects.