John12346's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[DEIMOS]

Aww...

This didn't make me pass my monk training! It just made me dead! :(

Still, the game was quite creepy, which was the main point of the game. Nice work.

Impkid responds:

haha me too! i said "no" like 3 times

[SMW 2]

Not Good.

It was laggy, there was no background, sound effects, or any length whatsoever.

Listen, the next time you work with sprites, you upload them in .PNG format, hear me.

Then, after that, get rid of the white backgrounds from behind the sprites, by doing this.

Modify
Trace Bitmap
Change Settings to 1, 1, Pixels, Normal, in that order.
Ok.
Deselect the Sprite
Click the White Background behind your sprite
Press delete.

There, now there aren't any more stupid white backgrounds behind your sprites, freeing you to put in backgrounds to your Flash.

Next, add sound effects. Just add them the same way you would with music. Just clear the keyframe at which you want the music to start, then add in the song.

Also, make your Flash movies longer, and come with some more original ideas.

MarkZ980 responds:

Thank of call me how to delete this fucking wite background. Now I can use background and i will try to do better sound effect...
I will try to do a sripts before do the movie.
Thank to write this comment.
You very help me ;)

[Torture & Kill Yoshi v1.1]

Really Good.

Thanks for using my music, btw.

Ways to improve/Suggestions:
1. Add in some sound effects.
2. Yoshi didn't do too much. For example, when you drowned him, Yoshi didn't do anything. Maybe you could've made Yoshi look like he was falling headfirst or something? That's just an example, but you get the point.

Good Flash.

Eltelelel responds:

your welcome, i would have added in some sound effects, but there is no yoshi sound board.
about yoshi falling in head first, it wouldnt make sense cause he was being pulled by his ankle from the chain.

i may take a break from flash and i am still deciding if i should add some extra content, the content i was thinking of adding was kind of disgusting (not in a violent way in that other way) it was going to be password protected content that only a few people on the internet i would let see.

[Mario Rocks]

Nice nice nice.

I liked watching the Mario Bros. and Wario rocking out like that.

Ways to improve/Suggestions:
1. It got repetitive and very boring to watch them just move their fingers like that. I suggest making them do other things during the song. (e.g. Sliding on knees, holding guitar in air and rocking out, etc.) Otherwise, the only reason people would watch for a second time would be to listen to the song again.

megaener responds:

yes you are right I'll make some modifications like you said (maybe) and upload an update. thank u

[Kirby Arena]

This was good.

I really liked the Flash, but the problem is is that it was as slow as molasses.

Try to speed things up a little, ok?

OrangeTails responds:

Maybe because you have a slow computer? Or slow internet connection, doesn't matter, as everyone else said 'I will make movement alittle faster, but not super fast.'

[Megaman`s Adventure PT.1]

Modify> Trace Bitmap

Modify> Trace Bitmap> 1, 1, Pixels, Normal> Ok> Deselect Working Screen> Click White Background> Press Delete.

No more silly white backgrounds.

spikeyguy777 responds:

I understand how to make the BG, its just that my cpu was going slow enough already.

[Random **** pt1]

Yay!

That was awesome. You win some internets and lollerskates.

Ways to improve:
1. Increase the length.

jimmy5327 responds:

I love lollerskates.

[Splash Attack]

LMAO

It took me a REALLY long time for me to realize that the Flash was switching to random scenes.

Ways to improve:
1. Give it and ending after about 200 scenes. PLEASE.

Sirschmoopy responds:

Ending ruins the joke.

[new starsyndicate cartoon]

Nice.

For a Star Syndicate Flash, it isn't so bad.

Ways to improve:

1. That first part, where you have the @ dancing. Shorten it. People will think it's a useless loop.

Starberry responds:

yeah this isn't exactly a serious attempt at anything