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That was so cool!

I couldn't keep up!

Ways to improve:
1. None.

Btw, the score right now, 3.92, is 1.00 point below the score I think you deserve.

Yay!

That was awesome. You win some internets and lollerskates.

Ways to improve:
1. Increase the length.

jimmy5327 responds:

I love lollerskates.

You don't need to beg for 5's.

You'll get them.

Ways to improve:
1. Add a background.

I'm reviewing the worst movie!

Needless to say, it wasn't good.

Ways to improve(So people won't mark this as abusive):
1. Add sound.
2. Add music.
3. Add a preloader.
4. Add a storyline.
5. Make something longer than a 2 frame loop.
6. Add a background.
7. Use more characters.
8. Make a credits page.
9. Try to create the illusion of movement.
10. Don't just import pictures to Flash; animate them!
11. Adding motion tweens will make your pictures move around the screen. Try it!

I voted 0 to keep the legacy, but I voted 5 in my heart!

OMG!

Pressing Space makes your win points increase by 50.

Ways to improve:
1. NONE

Rather strange.

There's no plot, the graphics are crap, the music was annoying, and one of your main menu buttons were broken. But I did see some potential, as you tried your hand at those 3Dish graphics.

Ways to improve:
1. You know how most FBF'ers change the character each and every frame to give the character the illusion of movement? Do that.
2. Use a less annoying song.
3. Add sound effects.
4. Add a plot. If there is one, make it clearer.
5. Fight scene. Add it.
6. Fix the 'more' button on your main menu.

There are no other submissions by this author.

You better hurry up and fix that!

Ways to improve:
1. None.

LMAO

It took me a REALLY long time for me to realize that the Flash was switching to random scenes.

Ways to improve:
1. Give it and ending after about 200 scenes. PLEASE.

Sirschmoopy responds:

Ending ruins the joke.

Nice.

For a Star Syndicate Flash, it isn't so bad.

Ways to improve:

1. That first part, where you have the @ dancing. Shorten it. People will think it's a useless loop.

Starberry responds:

yeah this isn't exactly a serious attempt at anything

OMG U SUC QWIT FLASH FOREVA!!

Kidding. This was actually very good.

Ways to improve:
1. I suppose a slightly gradiented background would be nice.

Suggestions:
1. You should use a storyline in a next flash!

RocketSoldier responds:

I'm writing a story now lol.

Thank you for the review.

Idk, I play a lot of games and stuff.

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