John12346's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Oroboros]

This should be made into a video game.

It's really that good.

[Newgrounds Rumble]

I can't believe it.

You gave this entry a 5, raising its score from 4.2764 to 4.2765!

My vote actually made a difference!

Ways to improve:
1. None

['Zers]

I fivened.

The game was nice.

Ways to improve:
1. Add music. It's not entirely important that you add it, but you should leave the option open.

Suggestions:
1. If you do something like this again, try to put 3 different games together.

[The Expert's Guide - NG 2]

Hmm...

Doesn't seem too different from the first one, but it's still pretty nice. Anyway, keep up the good work.

Ways to improve:
1. When I click the back button, it takes me to the previous menu. You should put in a button that takes you back to the last information screen as well.
2. On your 'is your movie eligible for an award' game, I used my movie with a score of 3.52 and a review score of 7.75 and it said I was eligible for Turd of the Week?!?!? WTF?!?

highwatermark responds:

Thanks.

[(LLL)GY Tetris]

Too many Tetris games.

Listen buddy, there are way too many Tetris games on Newgrounds, and this one is exactly the same as the others, with the level, score, and lines and game screen in the exact same place, with a few graphical alterations.

I don't like it.

Ways to improve:
1. Add a mute button.
2. Make something that says what the next block will be.

Suggestions:
1. Make a new, original game that no one has made yet. Sure, it will be confusing and take a lot of actionscript, but that's the point. WORK HARD! DON'T USE FLASHKIT!

[VG Trivia Challenge]

Yay! It looks good!

I'm glad to be a co-author for this game.

There were many many nooks and crannies in the game that made it very enjoyable, so I voted 5.

Ways to improve:
1. I went on a glitch hunt before the game's release, so none.

jogo52793 responds:

Hey- thanks for your help with the animations! And the review :D

[Black Sonic Bonus]

This has a lot of potential.

I mean seriously. You have all this knowledge of actionscript and you waste it like this? C'mon, man. If you added some nicer graphics, levels, music, things to trip over, and a time limit, this might end up being one good game.

Ways to improve:
1. Add nicer graphics.
2. Add music.
3. Add different levels.
4. Put in things you could trip over.
5. Add a time limit.

[[KK] Wordsearch 3]

Sweet.

I like the Kitty Krew Wordsearches. They are fun.

Your flash got 5'd

Ways to improve:
1. Add an eraser button to erase only unwanted drawing pieces.
2. Use better music.

[The Impossible Quiz]

Cool!

This game was really awesome and creative. After asking a million different people on the forums, I finally finished the game. Yay for cheating!

Ways to improve:
1. ADD FUCK'N CHECKPOINTS!!!
2. Some of the questions make no sense. They might make sense to you, but not to me and other NGers.

Congratulations, you made me make a new section in my reviews. First there was 'Ways to Improve," then there was "Suggestions for Your Next Flash," and now there's "The Ballbusters of This Flash!"

Ballbusters:
1. With no checkpoints in the game, it was a real pain in the ass for me to get back up to 100 or a high number like that.

[Music Mix Pong 3·1]

Personally, I liked it, but...

I'm going to have to vote 0 on this. There are way too many Pong remakes on Newgrounds and yours isn't exactly on my favorites list if you know what I mean.

If you do make a Pong remake, you're going to have to add enough options and awesomeness to rival Pong 2007(my personal favorite pong remake) and all of its greatness.

Also, there was a problem with your math. You said there were 29 more options, and yet there were only 12 different ways to play the game.

Finally, if you did submit a Pong game earlier on and it got blammed, ypu shouldn't name it Pong v1.2, because there was no preceding Pong for people to see. If I had made this game, I would've called it "Music Mix Pong" or something like that.

Ways to improve:
1. Add sound effects.
2. Add in a mute version of each level.
3. Make the game easier; normal mode is too hard.

Suggestions for your next flash:
1. Try making an original game. You can use the actionscript from your Pong game to figure something out.
2. Possibly make a flash movie first.